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Hi, folks! Andi here with her Friday installment of various things writing/reading related.

First–don’t forget about Sacchi Green’s book giveaway! Click here for the details!

Okay. Today, I want to chit-chat a bit about description. Not just as a writer–that’s something all writers deal with, actually–but as a reader. I read a lot. I read across genres, and I read lots of nonfiction. I love travel writing, books about history, anthropology, and forensics, and I totally dig books that deal with historical effects of weather. Yeah. I know. Total geek. But a couple of really good writers along my path have both told me that in order to be a better writer, read. Read everything. Don’t just read one genre or one type of literature or nonfiction. Read as many different kinds as you can, and many different authors, from many different eras. Read award-winning books to see what kinds of things judges look for when gauging literature or nonfiction. Doing so will provide you a foundation for building good instincts about what “sounds” good when you’re reading and writing.

I say that here because I’m one of those readers who will stop at a passage–usually a description–that grabs me by the throat and makes me think: DAMN I want to write like that! So not only am I reading as a reader and (hopefully) getting immersed in the story, but I’m also reading as a writer, and trying to figure out how to make my work stronger and hopefully, better.

I found one of those writers recently. So keep on if you want to know who it is.

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Complements of Connie Wilkins (aka erotica writer Sacchi Green) :

Connie will be giving away one copy of her latest glbt alternate history anthology - Time Well Bent :

We have always been here. For as long as there’s been such a thing as sex, alternate sexual identities have been a fact of life. So why have we been so nearly invisible in recorded history and historical fiction? Now editor Connie Wilkins, a Lambda Literary Award finalist, has assembled fourteen stories that span the centuries from ancient times to the Renaissance to the modern era and explore alternate versions of our past. Their queer protagonists, who bend history in ways dramatic enough to change the world and subtle enough to touch hearts and minds, rescue our past from invisibility, and affirm our place and importance throughout all of history, past, present, and future.

(including my short  story, Roanoke)

She’ll randomly pick the winner from commentors to this post, so please pop in a comment (and include your email address if it’s not obvious from your comment so we can find you!)

Let us know what point in history you’d love to go back to, or just say me to0 me too.

Connie will pick the winner this weekend.

I was doing a lot of gazing the other day. Gazing out the window, gazing at my navel, gazing at anything but my long list of house chores I’ve been putting off for months.  Then my gaze stuck on my bookshelves. And there are a LOT of them.   I think it’s the third or fourth Lesbian Commandment “Thou shalt horde books”, right under “Covet not thy neighbor’s wife” .

(and now that I mentioned your neighbor’s wife, you know you’re lookin’ at her in a different light now, aren’t you? tisk tisk).

Anyway, my bookshelf’s been predictable for years.  Stacks of science fiction, freaky collection of History, spattering of lesbian romance, and the odd graphic novel or two.

And I thought – I really need to shake that up a bit.

I’ve got a couple I’ve been thinking of.  I have to say Lizzy the Lezzy’s book is a real temptation. (Go watch the videos if you haven’t seen her before, but just a warning – she registers high on the Crude-o-meter!  but funny!)

I also got Yuri Monogatari #5 (yuri is girl-girl manga graphic novels) and might get some more of them. Yuri manga in short story format is quite a fun read.

Other than that, I’m stumped. So, I’m trolling for opinions/advice.  Which genre should I poke my head into (and what books should I start with).  Any recommendations?

The words of Ted Kooser, US poet Laureate, in an NPR interview.
“Ordinarily, I get up about 4:30 in the morning and I try to write till about 7:00. I’ve got an armchair down in the living room where I prop a cup of coffee on one arm and set my notebook on my lap. And I just sit there under the floor lamp early in the morning and work and see what happens. And nine days out of 10, nothing good comes of it at all. Maybe on the 10th day, if I’m lucky, you know, some little thing will start a poem. I feel that I’m really fortunate if, at the end of the year, after writing every day, I have a dozen poems I care about. That’s plenty. I don’t have great expectations for what happens in those morning sessions, but you know, if you’re not there writing, it’s never going to happen. My friend Roger Welsch out in Dannebrog, Nebraska, says, `You got to be there when the geese come flying in,’ you know. It’s just that sort of a thing.”
Ted Kooser is a brilliant writer with a dedicated practice. And, while I don’t have a schedule as regimented as Mr. Kooser, I can be pretty fanatical when it comes to forcing myself to sit in that chair, tossing out crumb after crumb in hopes of coaxing those damn geese to light on the pool of my imagination. Often it pays off. Often I walk away feeling satisfied that put my time in. I might even get lucky and hammer out a chapter. Once in awhile, however, I find the best thing I can do is step away from my computer and go do something else: garden, walk, cook—especially if I’m dealing with a particularly difficult plot point, or the chapter seems dead.
Stepping away gives my subconscious mind the room it needs to take a crack at whatever issue I’m dealing with. My subconscious mind works differently than my conscious mind. It needs space, time. And it sure doesn’t want me looking over its shoulder. It’ll spit something out when it’s good and ready. I’ll be pulling oxalis from my flowerbed when it blurts out the perfect solution for a messed-up storyline. Not only will it be brilliant, it will be something my conscious mind would have never thought to consider. Of course it’s important to have a pad and paper in these moments. Those geese can fly off as fast as they can fly in. But I guess what I’m trying to say is, in my case, I just never know where they’re going to land.

Quality v. Quantity

That’s a pretty standard debate when it comes to writing. On one side, there are strong arguments in favor of writing lots and lots of words with minimal concern for quality. National Novel Writing Month–a challenge to write 50,000 words in 30 days–is an extreme example of this school of thought. In 2008 official NaNo website recorded 120,000 participants, me included. 

On the other side, there are those who edit extensively while they write, considering each and every word and how it will help the story reach its goal. After all, how much is 50,000 words really worth if no one else would ever want to read it? (But that’s a whole ‘nuther debate–Do you write for yourself or the reader?)

In her blog on Friday, Andi made a good case in favor of simply getting the words onto the paper (or into the computer). And I can definitely see the benefits of that. It can be extremely cathartic to just let the words flow out of you in a sort of stream of consciousness kind of way.  However, that’s not my natural style.

whichway

Perhaps y’all aren’t aware of this, but I’m a wee tiny bit on the controlling side. When on vacation, I’m willing to deviate from a set itinerary if something better comes up, but without the plan in place, how could I weigh the options? I take the same approach with writing.

I outline extensively and spend an inordinate amount of time getting to know the characters up front before ever writing a word. Then I edit and rewrite as I go (this words much better if you have a beta reader who can critically assess a work in progress and who has quick turn around). Using this method, it’ll take me 60 days (instead of 30) to write a 50,000+ word manuscript. Worthwhile trade? I think so.

Here are some further thoughts in favor of NaNo, along with some cool worksheets if that kinda thing floats ya: Spacejock

And here’s another opposing viewpoint: Word Wranglers

The important part here is simply knowing which works best for your personality type. Happy writing, y’all.

99% of writing…

Is RE-writing! The following quote by author Anne Lamott sums up what most writers go through when they’re trying to put word to page.

Perfectionism is the voice of the oppressor, the enemy of the people. It will keep you cramped and insane your whole life, and it is the main obstacle between you and a shitty first draft. I think perfectionism is based on the obsessive belief that if you run carefully enough, hitting each stepping-stone just right, you won’t have to die. The truth is that you will die anyway and that a lot of people who aren’t even looking at their feet are going to do a whole lot better than you, and have a lot more fun while they’re doing it.
– Anne Lamott
source

Greetings, friends. I was thinking about this the other day, and one of the blogs I subscribe to–that would be the blog of author Kelley Eskridge–provided a great post about just this very subject, with that very quote. Kelley and her partner, author Nicola Griffith, run an editing service in addition to their other 9 million jobs/roles called Sterling Editing.

Kelley and Nicola blog over there, as well, and that’s where I found the blog “Rewriting” with that Lamott quote kicking it off. Kelley has some great tips there about approaching the re-writing process, tips that I use all the time in my own work. Give ‘em a try if you haven’t already.

At any rate, Lamott’s statement seems apt right now, given that many folks are currently engaged in National Novel Writing Month (or, NaNoWriMo), whose purpose is to get you to put 50,000 words to page within a month. It’s doable. I know because I’ve done it twice. And NaNo encourages you to ignore those voices of perfectionism that try to sabotage your process–the voices that tell you to go back and re-write, re-write, re-write, which is not possible during NaNo. Once you get your 50K words on paper, THEN you can re-write. And that’s where the REAL writing begins.

So don’t sweat that shitty first draft, as Lamott says. Get it onto the paper, bulldoze through it, then set it aside for a bit, as Kelley points out. Put that draft aside, get some folks to help you read it, and jump into your re-writing. The trick is getting that first draft completed so that you know you have a work there, you know you can get that draft hammered out. You’ve got to ignore that perfectionist streak while you’re working because it will sabotage your efforts. Nobody cares how shitty your first draft is, because nobody but your writing group members/beta readers are going to see it.

Go ahead. Have some fun with that first draft. After all, nobody’s perfect.

Happy writing!

I may have touched on the subject of space before, and if I have, please forgive my repetition. It’s something that’s affected me quite a lot over the past five or six months and helped me realize how important it really is.
Yes, we all need the time to write, but we also need the space. Whether it’s your own office, a cordoned off corner of the living room, or a comfy chair at the local Barnes & Noble, it’s imperitive – at least for me – to have someplace to write. This has become very clear to me recently, as Bonnie and I have spent nearly six months living with my 90-year-old grandmother.

Don’t get me wrong; Grandma has been absolutely wonderful. She couldn’t have been more wonderful. But after fifteen years together, we just have a hard time being crammed into a small space. We have two rooms upstairs. One is our bedroom. The second encompasses pretty much everything else we brought with us that wasn’t relegated to the storage unit: desk, computer, clothes, books, files, and miscellaneous other crap. We did really well for a couple months, but now we’re bumping into each other, feeling crowded, having trouble finding things, and worst of all, I’m not writing.
I’m not hurting for ideas, and maybe that’s the worst part. I’ve got new inspirations…a short story and two new novel ideas rolling around in my noggin. I just can’t seem to put them down on paper (or keyboard) and that’s because I feel smothered. I don’t feel like I can breathe in the same room with all my clothes, my toiletries, and countless pieces of junk that belong elsewhere. I’m not claustrophobic, but it kind of feels that way.
Maybe I’m being stupid. Maybe you’re thinking, “My god, Georgia, suck it up. Quit your whining and just write.” But my head doesn’t work that way. If my body feels trapped, so does my mind and things just back up to the point of being completely clogged. Luckily, we’ll be moving into our new house in less than two weeks and I’ll have a room all to myself, just for writing. It has two windows (I know several writers who write in dark little cramped cubbies and like it that way, but I prefer natural light…and plants) and lots of room for shelves of books, and it’s ALL MINE! I can’t describe what a relief it is. I honestly thought I’d be fine in the interim, but not being able to write has really made me cranky. Just ask Bonnie. It’s time to pull the plug and finally let the ideas flow right out. I can hardly wait.

What about the rest of you? Can you write anywhere or are there circumstances you need to have in order the get the creative juices flowing? Tell me I’m not alone. Please.

I feel so…USED

Hiya, kids—

Well, as some of you I’m sure are aware, there’s a debate going on in the lesfic blogosphere about used books. If you’re a member of Facebook, you can find one author’s take on it there. It’s KG MacGregor, and she raises the point that used book sales do not benefit an author. If you’re a friend of KG on Facebook, you can read it in her “Notes” section. It’s called “Trade-ins: Another nail in the coffin for lesbian fiction.”

Author Nicola Griffith made a similar argument in January. That one’s called “don’t be fucking cheap! a rant.” You can check that out right here.

Read the comments under both KG’s (if you can access it) and Nicola’s. That helps with more perspective, and it gives you other writers’ views and readers’ as well.

Now, initial reaction: KG and Nicola are right—authors make money off new book sales and not on subsequent sales of used books. Here’s where things get a little sticky, though. In order to ensure that your fave authors are making money, thus, you should (according to the arguments presented by KG and Nicola) purchase all their books new, and you should do so direct from the publisher (since large companies that start with an “A” further skim from publishers’ and authors’ royalties). Used books, the argument goes, hurt authors. Following that logic, loaning the book to friends also hurts authors. As would libraries, since hundreds of people can check a book out without buying it.

My take? I’m a writer. And a reader. And yes, I know that used books and book borrowing doesn’t give me any royalties. But I’m not sure what, if anything, there is to be done about it. Why? Because there are used markets for practically anything and I happen to be a consumer of used goods. Why? Various reasons. Money (lack thereof); not wanting to add to landfills; not wanting extra resources consumed in the production of a new item for me to buy. I’m sure we all have reasons for buying used, cost being one of the most important. KG argues that most people who buy used books just want cheap reads (something Nicola also seems to imply) and no matter how many used copies exchange hands, there’s no guarantee that one of those used book/loaner readers will turn into a new book reader. She may have a point. But on a deeper level, is it a “bad” thing, to want a “cheap read”?

KG also argues that a used book market could supplant new books in lesfic, making it harder for authors to break in and produce. Nicola notes that the more used books that are bought, the less inclined an author is to write and will probably have to spend most of her time working a day job while the “amateur” and “hack” writers are able to keep publishing. There might be merit to that argument, too, though I don’t have the figures to bear it out. And yes, a used market can play havoc with an author’s backlist. If nobody buys new copies of an author’s backlist, then there might be an argument made that the backlist books could go out of print. Which means even used copies become expensive.

Devil’s advocate—if that backlist is print-on-demand, there might not be that issue.

At any rate, there’s a used market for everything, and there’s been a used market for everything since there were things to market. And sure, it’d be GREAT if readers only bought new books of mine—one new book per reader. But books, unlike something like CDs, aren’t necessarily things that someone is going to enjoy over and over and over again. One read, maybe two. And then it sits on your shelf. So why NOT loan it to someone else? Like you loan your CDs? You bought it, after all. It’s yours to do with as you will.

Indeed, any artist is “hurt” when a used copy of his or her art is sold. Or rather, doesn’t make anything. So the argument itself has merit. However, perhaps people are so pissed about these rants because of the ways in which they’re presented. If you’re a reader, how did either of these posts make you feel? Guilty? Angry? Kind of “well, fuck you very much”? Or did you think: “wow. I never thought of it that way.” Maybe both? Mixed feelings?

And that’s why we here at Women and Words would like to now throw it open to you, the readers and other writers. What’s YOUR take on used books? Readers, do you think about an author not making royalties when you buy a used book or loan a copy out? Does it matter? If either KG or Nicola had couched their arguments differently—say, “hi, readers. Thanks for all your support! And if you could, at least once, buy a book new, that would be fabulous, thanks”—would that make a difference in your buying habits, if you buy primarily used books? Writers—what do YOU think about Nicola’s and KG’s (if you were able to read it) posts? Okay, then—go for it. We’d like to hear your thoughts.
But remember,

peace.

–andi

Wednesday, October 14th

5:00 p.m. Reading and Signing and schmoozing with snacks.
At 4 Mozart Avenue, Unit 1
Cheri Crystal, J.E. Knowles, Rrrose Carbinela, DK and Dalia Craig.

Saturday, October 17th

12:30 – 2 pm Lust, Dust, and Leather
Gabriel’s at the Ashbrooke Inn, 102 Bradford Street

Erotica and Romance Readings by Dalia Craig, Charlotte Dare, Dejay, Sacchi
Green, Victoria Oldham, Radclyffe, Cecilia Tan, Anna Watson

2:15 – 3 pm Book Signing
Now Voyager Bookstore, 357 Commercial Street

Dalia Craig, Charlotte Dare, Dejay, Sacchi Green, Victoria Oldham,
Radclyffe, Cecilia Tan, Anna Watson

I hope to see you there!

Dalia

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